Haiku: Dandelions in progress

v1.1

Setbacks are fleeting

Dandelions disperse with

hope’s cool breath spoken

v1.2

Setbacks are fleeting

Dandelions dispersing

by breath cool with hope

v1.3

Setbacks are fleeting

Dandelions dispersing

by your breath’s strong hopes

v1.4

Setbacks are fleeting

Dandelions disperse with

Your breaths whispered hopes

 

Earliar versions of this piece below, in non Haiku form

1st version

Feeding a setback with the meal of self-doubt

Fosters a cactus where once it a dandelion

Begrudingly dispersed with the easy of whispered hopes

 

2nd version

Setback are like dandelions

They often appear complex

but are easily dispersed under the breath of your spoken words

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